Too Late to be Sentimental

An excerpt from my novel, Diary of a Heretic: Click here to read the previous episode, and here to start from the beginning.

I remembered my manners and asked Carlos, “What about you?  What do you want to happen in the New Year?”

He planted a hand on either side of my thighs and smirked. “You’ll never believe it.”

“Yes I will.”

“I want the same as you,” Carlos said. “And I want it this year.”

“With me, it’s just something I dream about, but not in any real context.”

“Name one reason we can’t do it,” Carlos said. “It’s bound to make money.”

“It’s my private fantasy. And actually starting an after-hours group, were it possible, would change everything.”

“Everything’s changing anyway,” Carlos said.  “I’ve watched you a long time, Malcolm, and I can tell:  You can do it. And with me orchestrating—”  he refilled our glasses, “We’ll get very rich, very fast.”

I laughed and the worst of my fear abated. “For a second, I thought you were serious.”

He nodded and pointed a long skinny index finger at me.   

We finished the whole bottle of champagne. I was surprised so much time had passed. It was already almost midnight, the New Year. He wrapped the tulip-shaped glasses in two dishtowels and set them carefully in his backpack. When he put on his wool hat, I blurted out, “Hey, you’re not going.  Look at the clock. Ten minutes.”

“Don’t be ridiculous.” He zipped up his thick leather jacket.

“If you leave before twelve, you’re being—stingy.”

“Malcolm, it’s too late for you to get sentimental. Kissing my cheeks, he said, “Próspero Año Nuevo!” and left me alone in my shop.

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Comments

[bosco]

"getting rich, very fast" is almost always a bad thing (from what I've heard)

[Mimi Lenox]

Ooh la la......ten minutes before midnight on New Year's Eve. Left me wanting more! Great writing.

[Deborah]

Oh! New Years memories! What an interesting plot. I'll be going back to read from the beginning!

Deborah
www.therhythmofwrite.com

[Dan Leo]

I meant to mention before, and Deborah beat me to it; this is such a great set-up for a story. And we all love stories.

[KathleenM.]

Thanks for the acknowledgment, Deborah and Dan. And rest assured, a real big story is there and won't go neglected, to the best of my limited ability.